Some further points about improving my sketch writing

Soooooo,

I've stepped back a little bit for a second thinking about my sketches.

Some quick thoughts:

Good Points

• Getting better at finding punchlines (probably got a bit to go yet)
• Getting much better at finding the sound of the character.
• Lots of funny jokes throughout the dialogs

Bad Points

• Not really creating an action / scene.   I still tend towards funny dialog.   (I think this will be my next focus).    Creating drama etc
• Not really moved out of the non-topical arena (struggling to write non-topical sketches)
• Writing for existing characters (need to learn to create my own)

Will post some actual sketches soon!!!